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I want you.
Avatar By Tech.no.38800715
Posted 29 May 2012 05:32
Category: Poetry
In the middle of a snowy field she stood.
It was empty and quiet so nobody could interrupt the most beautiful singing you've ever heard.
Abandoned at birth, rejected by family. She truly had nothing to keep her from being mad chilly.
A cape on her back, long brown hair blowing swiftly. She found that her chances of living were fifty/fifty.
She was still young with very little experience, her big hazel eyes made her a girl with a wonderful appearance.
Lips so red they could be mistaken with fresh blood, she looked as exquisite as a newely grown flower bud.
To her, there was no reason for life. Her cheeks were so rosy, it was actually quite nice.
Climbing a cliff and looking down, everything around her made her seem as though she were to drown.
As she approached the top, she continued to sing. Pondering what sort of thing her life would bring.
Once at the top, she stops one last time, looks around for a moment or two, closes her eyes and steps off.
Knowing she will no longer be around when she drops.
And just before she left forever, she felt somebody grip her hand, still in bad weather.
She opens her eyes and looks up to see, a boy around her age thinking stop being so silly.
Her eyes widen, tears rolling down her face. He pulls her up and looks at her, staying in his place.
His big blue eyes can't get off of her. He knows he can't help himself so he goes closer to the girl asking if she needs help in a friendly manner.
She looks down for a moment and realizes he still hadn't let her hand go. I want you, she said and the boy said okay, following her flow.
Featured: Yes (Nope.avi)
Rating +15
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Avatar AlphaTr1force
06 Mar 2013 21:52
BORING.
Avatar Voizer
31 Jan 2013 22:48
What is "Following her flow"?
Did they both jump?
Avatar Mr.Riot
04 Oct 2012 19:57
Another Sarah masterpiece. Love it +1
Avatar DefinedFate
25 Jun 2012 01:57
I lik3 I〒. [:
=.=
Avatar Tech.no.38800715
30 May 2012 23:21
Quoth xXNeon-HeartXx:
The poem kinda jumps from place to place in certain parts and isn't as smooth as a really, really top-notch poem should be, but it's still really good. Nice job. ^~^

It doesn't. It's a poem style. Anyway, it clearly states that the girl is climbing a cliff from the field in the poem if that's what you mean.
Avatar xXNeon-HeartXx
30 May 2012 05:06
The poem kinda jumps from place to place in certain parts and isn't as smooth as a really, really top-notch poem should be, but it's still really good. Nice job. ^~^
Avatar GLiTTeRGUy
29 May 2012 17:27
This is amazing!! O: Yhu're a good poet! Keep it up!
Avatar Village Idiot
29 May 2012 05:49
This is amazing Sarah.
Avatar xXLovelyXx
29 May 2012 05:44
I'm not one who enjoys poetry but wow. This is waaaay good! ^-^
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