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Abandoned
Avatar By SUPERIOR
Posted 24 Jul 2012 20:35
Category: Poetry
I remember your voice,
The way you said I love you.
The touch of your hand,
Your sweet perfume.

We were secure,
Our love was true,
We dreamed of our futures,
My future was you.


Summer left and autumn came,
The leaves changed and withered,
And your love wasn't the same.
You even started to forget..

Forget what had happened,
The words you had used,
And the love that we shared,
You forgot how much I cared.


You were my life and my love,
My motivation to give it all,
The reason I changed.
Why won't you answer my call?

I wish you would stay.
I'm withering away,
I need your love,
And think everyday,


What it would be,
If I would of known,
That one day, like now,
You would be gone.


~DC
Featured: Yes (BanMan)
Rating +6
Comments
Avatar DeviantHawkeye
27 Jul 2012 01:56
Hmm.
I actually liked it. And I'm not one for poetry.
Avatar The DuDe
26 Jul 2012 11:07
Thumbs up!
Avatar Asparagus
26 Jul 2012 03:18
Yikes... This is good. +1
Avatar Kayla2448
25 Jul 2012 17:56
Sad
Avatar MyRose
25 Jul 2012 15:46
Nice job, Btw.
Avatar SUPERIOR
25 Jul 2012 07:37
I know how you feel
Avatar MyRose
25 Jul 2012 07:19
...Is it bad if I can relate to this?
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